Friday, December 2, 2011

Criticize my writing please?

Question by lawlman91: Criticize my writing please?
The golden and high palace walls watched over the Prince who strode across the red carpet, approaching the king.

"Yes, father?" the prince knelt before the king.

Sternly, the king declared, "Lead the Trident."

The prince's eyes widened with worry, "W-why?"

"Why?!" the king snapped, "You dare question orders?!"

"The Trident is a suicide mission, father."

The king remarked, "It is not."

The prince bottled rage, "By what statistics, father? We'll be outnumbered four-to-one. Why does the Trident even exist in the first place?"

"Listen to me," the king reassured, "You'll be all right, Stan. Gonza will assist you"

A tear rolled down Stan's face as he recognized the authority of the order, and the inevitability of dying with the all-out attack force, the Trident. He also recognized his own inability to lead, pra quality that had haunted him since adolescent awareness.

He had worried about becoming king in a few years because of his poor leadership. Now, he was immediately called to lead.

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Some cool nessie images:


Image by dalancarter
Nessie play feature in Manor Park - head


Image by cronewynd
Nessie was busy turning when we got to the riverbank... I just missed a good shot of her green side...


Image by paulafunnell
Nessie on Loch Ness!

Thursday, December 1, 2011

Prankster Plants Pot At Court

Australian police are calling it a pot prank. Someone apparently planted dozens of marijuana plants in the front garden of the Bellingen Court House in New South Wales.

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Loch Ness Monster

A few nice loch ness monster images I found:

Loch Ness Monster

Image by Anosmia
35 mm shot of poor Nessie being harrassed by tourists at the Loch Ness Monster Visitor Centre in Drumnadrochit

Loch Ness Monster maintenance room

Image by Spatch
The Loch Ness Monster trains are serviced and maintained here. While Arrow Dynamics no longer makes roller coasters, Busch can still get parts fabricated. They also rely on other coasters, receiving one of the trains from Python at Busch Gardens Tampa when that ride closed.

Bigfoot, Loch Ness Monster, amateur college athletes -

Bigfoot, Loch Ness Monster, amateur college athletes
“A college needs something else besides education. And what this college needs is a good football team, and you can't have a good football team unless you have good football players.” – “Horse Feathers,” 1932 “A college needs something else besides ...

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